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Review: The Fall by Bethany Griffin

Review: The Fall by Bethany Griffin
The Fall by Bethany Griffin
Published by Greenwillow Books
Published on: October 7, 2014
Genres: Horror, Young Adult
Pages: 432
Format: eARC
Source: Edelweiss
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Madeline Usher is doomed.

She has spent her life fighting fate, and she thought she was succeeding. Until she woke up in a coffin.

Ushers die young. Ushers are cursed. Ushers can never leave their house, a house that haunts and is haunted, a house that almost seems to have a mind of its own. Madeline’s life—revealed through short bursts of memory—has hinged around her desperate plan to escape, to save herself and her brother. Her only chance lies in destroying the house.

In the end, can Madeline keep her own sanity and bring the house down?The Fall is a literary psychological thriller, reimagining Edgar Allan Poe’s classic The Fall of the House of Usher.

ya freaky WTF

When I was in college, I CLEP-ed out of Survey of American Literature. I did this b/c I HATE American Lit. I hate Henry James, Nathaniel Hawthorne, Herman Meville, Hemingway, Faulkner, I hate them ALL.

There is one exception . . .

Edgar Allen Poe.

As much as I hate the others, I love Poe.

I love Poe so much that for the first time ever, I felt like I had a legitimate reason for picking one football team over the other in the Superbowl a couple of years ago . . . the Baltimore RAVENS (b/c Poe lived in Baltimore).


While Poe’s The Fall of the House of Usher isn’t my favorite of his short stories, I’m familiar with it, and I appreciate it. And more importantly it’s the kind of horror I can get down with, the more cerebral kind of horror. It’s written from the POV of Roderick Usher’s boyhood friend, who has come to visit at Usher’s request. The setting is exceedingly ominous, and someone is inevitably buried alive.

So when I saw The Fall by Bethany Griffin, it was a no-brainer—how cool would it be to use Poe’s original story as the foundation of an entire novel, told from to POV of Roderick’s sister? SO cool.

Unfortunately, it didn’t quite live up to my expectations.

I rarely read horror (b/c chicken). That being said, when I do read horror, especially when it’s October, Autumn (my favorite season) is creeping in, and Halloween is looming in the distance, I want to be, at the very least, seriously creeped out.

The creepiest part of this book was the expectation of a taboo brother/sister relationship, which is, yes, seriously creepy, but it was not the kind of creepy I was looking for.

I wanted sinister, I wanted malevolent, I wanted foreboding . . . and I didn’t get it.

Maybe that’s on me, maybe it isn’t. I don’t know.

But that wasn’t the only problem.

Roderick and Madeleine Usher are twins. They are the only children in their household, so it’s no surprise that they are very close. Even as children, there were hints of something more between them (ICK), but they are separated when, in their mother’s attempt to stave off the family illness from her favored offspring, Roderick is sent away to school, leaving Madeleine alone.

Except for the house that has chosen her as its heir.

Okay, so that’s sufficiently creepy.

But while the idea itself had a definite creep factor, the overall feel of the book, the setting, many of the evidences of the sentience of the house . . . did not. Which is surprising, b/c given the scenario, it should have been like shooting fish in a barrel.

And that’s not the worst of it.

When Roderick goes away to school, Madeleine decides to start a garden. We’re told that both the house and the surrounding area are cursed, and specifically that the curse causes every growing thing on the grounds to become diseased and/or rot, yet Madeleine is inexplicably able to grow healthy ivy. AND not just any ivy, ivy that can ultimately counter the evil of the house.


And sure, I suppose that in a world where a house and family can become cursed, there can be other types of magic as well, but where this alien ivy magic comes from is never revealed.

There is also no explanation for the survival and reappearance of a certain proper noun (sorry, can’t tell), presumed dead, after sacrificing itself to save Madeleine from the friendly neighborhood KRAKEN (or monster octopus/squid/whatever—it’s unclear, so I went with KRAKEN) that lives in the noxious waters of the House’s tarn (a small mountain lake).

Then there was the open ending. *sighs*

But despite all those things, it wasn’t all bad. Dr. Winston was a superbly diabolical character, and many of the other characters and situations that were merely hinted at in the original were fleshed-out beautifully in The Fall. I’d recommend this anyone who thinks they might like horror-lite, or who doesn’t get hung up on things like understanding why and/or how the villain is defeated.

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My name is Jessica and I live in Chattanooga, Tennessee. I’m trying my hand at writing, but mostly I read. My favorite genres are Fantasy, Paranormal Romance, Science Fiction, Urban Fantasy, and the YA versions of those genres, but if there is a book of a different color getting lots of buzz, I’ll read it too, just to be informed. If I’m not reading or writing, I’m probably on Goodreads or Pinterest or baking blueberry pies because I love them.



  1. I have been very curious about this one but a bit wary cause I didn’t like the previous book by this author that I had tried (it was a DNF for now, and still haven’t returned to it…) but I was looking forward to some mild horror (yes, I’m also a massive wuss!)…

    Now after your review I’m even more in the fence… Oh well!
    Thank you Jessica!
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    • Drat, LOL. I’m sorry I wasn’t more helpful. On the one hand, this is a brand of horror that even the biggest chicken (ME) can handle, on the other . . . Good luck, either way 😉

  2. Oh no! Really? But, but I really want to read this and I don’t want it to be weird or wtf! I am probably still gonna read it, but damn! Thanks for the honest review.
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    • Well, here’s hoping it goes better for you—no one ever reads exactly the same book, and all that 😉

  3. I understand why you expected all that but it’s sad you didn’t have all you wanted… It sounded really interesting, mainly in the Poe idea, but I’m sorry it wasn’t up to that. I think I’ll pass.

    • Yeah, Poe was a big selling point for me, but sometimes it just doesn’t work. I NEED to know how things happen, and if a book doesn’t explain it . . . blah.

  4. Props goes out to the author for attempting something as magnanimous as Poe. While you’ve highlighted some read-worthy points, horror is just not my thang. *shrugs*

    Lovely review, Jess. 🙂
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  5. After all that, AND tossing in a Kraken type monster, she still left you with a open ending? NO WAY! I hate that! Worse than a cliffhanger. I want closure. Tell me what to think, what happened!!! Grrrr… so glad I thought twice and didn’t grab this one. Thank you for falling on the, err, house on this one 😉
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    • HA! Falling on the house . . . *snickers* PUNS! I love PUNS 😉 I do not love open endings. Like you, I need closure.

  6. Only 2 of my friends on GR have reviewed this book. You, of course, with a 2 star rating and the other gave it a gushing 5 star review =) Not sure if I want to go ahead and buy it like I had planned to or wait for the library.
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    • Well . . . you could wait just to be safe, and if you really like it after borrowing it from the library, then you could buy it 😉 It all depends on how bothered you’d be by the lack of an explanation.

  7. i’m not tempted by Poe’s stories and honestly i don’t think this one is for me either but i did appreciated the review
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  8. Ok…NOT reading this one
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  9. I loved he Poe idea behind this one but since I’m not much of a horror book person I was on the fence about this one and unfortunetly you’ve only cemented my ‘on the fence’ place about this one! I’m just not sure if this one is for me.
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    • Yeah, if you’re on the fence, I’d wait. This book definitely isn’t for everyone, and if your TBR pile looks anything like mine . . .

  10. Bummer about this one. They sent me a copy and creepy books aren’t my usual genres, but I still wanted to give it a shot. I might still, depends on how my TBR is…
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    • And hey, maybe you’ll like it more than I did. Good luck, either way 😉

  11. Amen sister. This fucked me over, I wasn’t sure what I read and what the ending was exactly. I’m so happy I’m not the only who was dissatisfied with this book
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  12. Oh no! I am so sad that you didn’t like this one more! Blah. This author isn’t for everyone though.
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  13. What a shame, because that’s one great cover – it would have gotten my attention and I would have expected something sufficiently scary. Glad it was creepy, but horror-lite also doesn’t sound too appealing.
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  14. Hmmm, Just the creep factor alone is enough to get me really interested in this one. Thanks for the great review. I love it when a book can make me think, “wtf” a few times while reading it.
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  15. I had the same feelings about this book. It started out creepy and I liked the setting, but the middle part was.. boring. The ending let me down too.
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  16. I’m sad you didn’t like this one as much as I did but I get it. I didn’t go into this expecting a horror, more a gothic, so maybe that made a difference. I thought the atmosphere was fantastic and I loved the eerie vibe throughout. It’s def weird with the whole house and Ivy thing but I love weird >.< Great review, Jessica! At least you didn't absolutely hate it! 😉
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  17. Hmm the cover is freaky! Not really my kind of book though. Great review though Jessica!!
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  18. Funny how I really should run away from this one, yet I’m still very curious..I think is could come down and how much I’m sold on growing the garden under those circumstances and the overall believability of the story, but then again every fiction book is in the same
    Great review Jessica 🙂
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  19. I have to agree with you. Edgar Allan Poe is one of the only authors that I can wholeheartedly say I love. That being said, I’ve never actually read the story this book is based on, but I’ve heard of it.
    While a bit disappointing I still want to read it. I love reading about relationships. *shrugs*

    Great review, Jessica.

  20. I gave up on this one. I tried 3 times, but I just couldn’t get into it. I’m familiar with the ‘original’, so I looked forward to reading this. But I guess it just wasn’t meant to be.
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  21. The diabolical aspect with him sounds like an interesting part even if some others weren’t as well done

  22. I’ve seen a bunch of really awesome reviews for this book, so it’s sad you didn’t like it. But yours is the only review that mentions non-closure ending and a slightly icky relationship. Those are both good things to know. I still have this on my wishlist since POE, but it’s good to hear a non-loving side too.
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  23. I love a good horror story, and the more darkly atmospheric the better. I find Poe strangley fascinating, so I’m excited to check this one out. I’ve heard it mentioned about the possible ‘ick factor’ and that does not surprise me with Poe (not sure if it’s in the original or not.) I just my got a copy from the library – so we shall see *rubbing hands* lol 🙂
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  24. I like to know the why and/or how a villain is defeated. I think I’ll pass on this one.
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  25. haha I like the WTF picture. It sounds like an eerie premise. I’ve never read the original, but I’m sorry it didn’t do it for you. There’s nothing wrong with being a chicken, the cowards survive! lol @ not the kind of creepy you wanted. I hate books that don’t end, between that and the being saved by magic ivy I think I’ll pass on this one. Thanks for saving me from it. 🙂
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  26. I’m not a big fan of American lit either, honestly. I definitely prefer Canadian lit, hehe. 😉 That said I did enjoy the Fall of the House of Usher and it sounds like The Fall didn’t really do it justice. The idea of turning that house into a place of light and goodness just seems so impossible…it’s the classic American Gothic idea of a haunted house. The incest vibe between siblings is also classic Gothic, sadly. Too creepy.
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  27. Ooh bummer! I have been really curious about this one despite not being a huge horror fan. I like to know the details of why a villain would be defeated as well.

    A great review.
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  28. *ick* Brother / sister relationship you said? That isn’t even truly creepy to me, just seriously icky! So I would probably not be very happy with The Fall, either, Jessica. And I am like you when it comes to horror, too, I don’t read a lot of horror stories, but when I do, I want to be a little scared and a lot creeped out.
    Great review 🙂
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  29. I love Poe, too, Jessica. So I’m always excited when I see stories using his work as the foundation. However, I’m thinking I may steer clear of The Fall. The creep factor is one of the best things about Poe so I don’t think it was wrong to expect that element in something based on his story. And while I’m glad there was a well-done diabolical character, it seems like that was the only bright spot. That’s just too bad. Your review though, is very well-done! 😉
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  30. Oh man, I just peeked at your rating because I’m in the middle of the book now. But I’m seeing many of the same ratings from other friends, so you don’t seem to be alone in your feelings! I am sad because I like the atmospheric writing so far. But I gotta admit, nothing’s happened just yet.
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